3P-PLAN, PREPARE & PRACTICE

Before presentation I practiced afew times with my friend,Dinesh.He gave me afew tips 2 improve my presentation.After completing it,he gave me both good and bad comments about my presentation and my slides and tips. These are the criteria used to evaluate my presentation.The Speaker/ Presenter
(i) LANGUAGE: He said my language is fluent and I need to improve my pronunciation and say the words clearly.
(ii) EFFECTIVENESS: The presentation is about myself and I did talk bout myself only.
(iii) STRUCTURE: He sugegest me to make the slides more colourful and attractive with adding music while showing the pictures
(iv) DELIVERY: He said i was confident during my presentation and spoke fluently.However I need to improve my body language so that I am not a statue in front.
(v) VOICE: He told me my voice was abit soft but still clear with correct intonation.
(vi) TIME MANAGEMENT: I had exceeded the time given and I should manage the time properly.

(b) The Slides
(i) LANGUAGE: The words used are simple and appropriate to the contents.
(ii) EFFECTIVENESS: He understands my content and the flow of my presentation.
(iii) STRUCTURE: HE asked me to make my slides more colourful for my presentation.
(iv) CREATIVITY: Overall, he told he like my slides especially the font type and size, photos, and the arrangements of slides